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Blue eyed girl

Blue eyes
In a cruel world
as she sighs
in the corner she's curled
devoted to her art
she is always working hard
in the world she has her part
she isn't another playing card
in her own world
were she
s safe
the law is her word
love comes at a cost
just look at what she's lost





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GraceMarie said...
Dec. 14, 2011 at 8:30 pm
I love this poem! My boyfriend said that it sounded like me... I don't think so but it is very beautiful. Check out my stuff(:
 
jack_the_pumpkinking replied...
Dec. 14, 2011 at 11:10 pm
Thank you so much You dont know how much it means to me to hear this. Also I will look at your stuff you are a very nice person.
 
Grace V. replied...
Dec. 19, 2011 at 12:38 pm
Hahaha no problem! Thanks to you too!
 
jack_the_pumpkinking replied...
Dec. 28, 2011 at 4:23 am
For doing what?
 
GraceMarie replied...
Dec. 29, 2011 at 2:26 pm
Uhmm...Saying I was nice..? Hahaha Idk!
 
SonicRainboom87 replied...
Jan. 5, 2012 at 3:29 pm
lol, its actually about me, when ever he thought i was some girl he used to be in love with.. xD now he knows that he shouldnt love me!
 
GraceMarie replied...
Jan. 6, 2012 at 1:16 pm
Okay...uhmm...awkward!
 
jack_the_pumpkinking replied...
Jan. 27, 2012 at 12:36 am
Yea reallly Sonic ok then sorry bout that Grace
 
GraceMarie replied...
Jan. 29, 2012 at 4:03 pm
Hahaha that's alright!
 
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