Bliss MAG

August 31, 2011
By Mia Dohrmann BRONZE, Wykoff, New Jersey
Mia Dohrmann BRONZE, Wykoff, New Jersey
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Lemonade stands
Touching hands,
Long bike rides
And changing tides

The miles of sand
Days go unplanned,
Dirty cleats
And bare feet

Barbecue and fireworks
Are among the season's perks,
Lazy days go on and on
And soon enough, another dawns

The blistering weather
Draws us closer together,
Memories shared with friends
None of this could possibly end

Shining sun
And endless fun,
Rafts and beachballs
Life is a free-for-all

Strong waves of the ocean
Will cause a commotion,
A beautiful sun sets
The dark casts our silhouettes

Warm nights die down
As our smiles turn to frowns,
We've reached the end of summer
Fall is near and it's such a bummer.



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Lady Jeffy said...
on Sep. 27 2011 at 2:18 pm
Great imagery!  Way to go, mimi!

StepdadKeith said...
on Sep. 26 2011 at 6:41 pm
Great poem, Kid. Keep writing, you have talent.

on Sep. 26 2011 at 4:17 pm
Go Mimi!  That is wonderful!  Keep up the good work and keep dreaming!  xxx

elsass said...
on Sep. 26 2011 at 3:06 pm
Beautiful!!!  Can't wait for Mia to share her thoughts on the Fall!!!

elsass said...
on Sep. 26 2011 at 3:04 pm
Beautiful!!!  Can't wait for Mia to share her thoughts on the Fall!!!

carolita said...
on Sep. 26 2011 at 2:19 pm
Me thinks there is a lot of Irish poet  in your soul.. Why Mia, you can invite me to our castle in Galway....

tjd72 said...
on Sep. 26 2011 at 12:29 pm
love it.....can picture each verse:)


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