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Forsaken, Forgotten
did you to me.
When I proposed
to be with thee.
That was when
you departed from me.
In so it became
forever ago
you left me
and
the idea of "we" behind
Now you return
and
expect “us” to be
but foreign you became to me
Forgotten and abandon
did the idea of "we"
became to me.
So long ago
when I first proposed
the idea of "you and me "
Now you are sad
and filled with regret
Because we can never be
for I have chosen another.
One more beautiful
and much more willing
to be with me.
So
Now you know of the truth of what love can be:
Forever:

Forsaken



Forgotten

Abandon
Just like what you did to me
and the idea of "we"
all those years ago
When you left…



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NaomiPikalek said...
Jan. 14, 2013 at 1:09 pm:
this one really spoke to me, it made me feel somthing deep within myself.... your words just explode in all the best ways.
 
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Shadowpomgurl said...
Dec. 18, 2012 at 11:43 am:
wow!  i like this a lot! keep it up!
 
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