See Me, Save Me

August 27, 2011
If you see me
It would only be
A smear on bloodstained window

If you were me
I would hope to be
A savior for a fee

Saving me
So lavishly
From the world that won't stop killing me

I hope we leave
In fashion bereaved
That would be for all eternity

Pray for me
In hope I might see
The gold around your face

So that your peace
Will not be brief
Or alone upon this reef

I hope to be
What you see
So to love you in my sleep

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White_Demon_Rekishi said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 12:14 am
Short, sweet, and simply amazing. I love this poem, very nicely done! <3 :D
Sassychix234 said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 10:42 pm
This is really good. I love when you use 'peace' and 'brief' as a ryhme. 
DependentMissIndependent said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 10:42 pm
I find this very Unique and differnt... I LOVED IT!!
Forgotmypassword said...
Oct. 9, 2011 at 9:57 pm
This is my favorite. Hands down this rocks
PrincessBubblegum replied...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 10:35 pm
I hate to agree. It was lovely.
sunshine7223 replied...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 10:43 pm
This is good. (: I really enjoyed it! I like the story you told, in so little words. Short poems are not my fortay, but you did a great job!
goldenrunner said...
Aug. 30, 2011 at 9:09 pm
It may have been created out of thin air, but I really enjot the simplicity yet meaning in this one. I thinks its great even though you may think its not as good as some of your other work.
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