My Favorite Thing

August 20, 2011
By stunstyle BRONZE, Novato, California
stunstyle BRONZE, Novato, California
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Favorite Quote:
Don't let your dreams stay dreams


Like when your fave song comes on
Like dancing without a care
Like when you enter a room and everyone stops to stare
Better than when you make someone smile
Like when you find your head bobbing to the beat
Better than a penny you found on the street
For this thing I would crawl a mile
Just to make it stay awhile
Better than hitting the bed after a long day
Like when someone knows exactly what you where about to say
Like sunshine on my face
Better than in Blackjack getting an ace
Like a drink that warms your insides
Better than when you succeed after all your tries
Better than this new diamond ring
You are my favorite thing


The author's comments:
I wrote this piece because when you love someone, that love triumphs over every other of your very favorite things. I wrote this poem to also point out all the little things in life that people sometimes do not full appreciate.

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on Jan. 16 2013 at 3:56 pm
In_Love_with_Writing GOLD, Easton, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me." Phillipians 4:13

Very cute! Nice work! Can you comment and rate some of my stories?

on Aug. 25 2011 at 5:05 pm
Laura_Oliver GOLD, Manchester, Connecticut
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I like this poem, but you probably shouldn't have tried to force the rhymes. I think it would have worked better if it had used non-rhyming stanzas or something...anyway, the concept is great, so good job.

juanita said...
on Aug. 24 2011 at 5:36 pm
Stunstyle's poem is great! I makes thereader feel good, because everyone wants to be a favorite.

LaMarthe said...
on Aug. 24 2011 at 5:07 pm
I could relate to all of your statements.  What a great poem!


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