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Roses are red,
Violets are blue.
You are perfect
And I love you.

Grass is green,
But some is brown,
My hidden beauty
Will not be found.

Skies are blue,
But some are gray,
Though I'm imperfect,
Oh, won't you stay?

You see the beauty,
In gray, brown, and blue,
Because you are perfect,
And I love you.




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crazycoolcritterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 12, 2011 at 6:23 pm:

awwww!! how cute!!

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Lexie96 said...
Nov. 7, 2011 at 6:06 am:

I love this... the end is so sweet and the metaphors are just brilliant! Great writing!

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yasmina.tabbal said...
Aug. 16, 2011 at 9:00 am:
YES! HAHAHA FINALLY! :D I'm the first to comment :P man do i love this. Its like love is all about loving someone else's imperfections.. and thats what makes them perfect :)
 
aveawave replied...
Aug. 16, 2011 at 10:28 am :
Thats exactly how I was feeling when I wrote this! haha! Too many people judge the ones they "love" on looks, not personality. Especially in high school.
 
yasmina.tabbal replied...
Aug. 23, 2011 at 11:57 am :
you have no idea
 
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