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Resolution

August 6, 2011
By Sydney Bradley BRONZE, San Francisco, California
Sydney Bradley BRONZE, San Francisco, California
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Rewrite the routine,
It leaves a soul black and blue.
Freedom’s bursting at the seam,
Routine is gum stuck to a shoe.

I still cringe at my passing,
How I was eaten up whole
by the clock I heard ticking


till it gained all control.

I ran with one broken wing,
Gasping for each foreign breath.
I dispatched the itching sting


soon it was all I had left.

The plan sticks in the throat,
All you can speak is your own name.
You weren’t born an abstract painting


to slide beneath a silver frame.

Leaving harbor any minute,
You’ve been restless since birth
So set sail off the edge of your make-believe earth.

Before you step toward the light,
Sharpen up your mind and knife.
Carve a brand new etching


on a predictable life.


The author's comments:
It is important that my generation recognizes what predetermined expectations society places on our shoulders, and how our lives are based on a schedule or plan. We need to break free, so that our innocence and spirit will not be crushed by the weight of a routine that has been decided for us. We need to write our own futures.

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on Aug. 15 2011 at 12:12 pm
Sydney Bradley BRONZE, San Francisco, California
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Thank you! that is such great feedback it made my day!

HollyGo said...
on Aug. 15 2011 at 11:13 am
HollyGo, San Francico, California
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This poem reflects the compulsion to over schedule and over burden the youth of today - foising early development, advanved learning and fierce competition upon the under-18 set, also known as the Race to Nowhere. This writer expresses this with elegant tools and great aplomb. The best I've seen on this site in a long time!