June 26, 2008
By Winter-Razorblade BRONZE, Halifax, Other
Winter-Razorblade BRONZE, Halifax, Other
4 articles 0 photos 5 comments

It's not the same without you, Shadow.
You've understood my love for the darkness,
You believed in blood, you had faith in tears,
You wanted me for who I was;
An emo girl with a broken life.
You knew the reason behind the scars,
Embraced my wrists and their distorted skin,
Caressed the veins I've come close to splitting,
Kissed the crimson forever flowing.
All in simple words, Shadow,
You've shown me care when no one else would,
You made me smile through growing sadness,
You've broken my habit of relief in crying.
It's you who helped me leave it behind,
It was you who convinced me to try to survive,
It's you who ceased suicidal thoughts.
It's you I would spill my heart to,
And you who kept it safe for me.
Shadow, why did you go?
The gun had rested in your hands,
Hands meant to hold ruined lives.
You stroked the cold, unforgiving metal,
Held it to your frayed mind;
With a simple movement it all ended.
An ear-splitting noise and a shattering scream,
You took away the one thing I wanted.
My Shadow.
Just an emo boy with a broken life.

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on Jul. 20 2009 at 4:31 pm
Raid2bcool GOLD, Visalia, California
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Favorite Quote:
"People may not be able to get to the top because of who they are.... but they ARE able to do what IS at the top."

this poem is so sad... but i love it cuz i have friends that can relate... keep writing strong

on Jul. 8 2009 at 8:14 am
Only,I PLATINUM, Taylorville, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
This too shall pass.

this is quite beautiful.. the depth of this is amazing its touching and depressing and the emotion in this is just amazing.


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