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February 21, 2008
Your words are glorious splendors
that become eminent in the tropic winds
and in the dying night
symphonies of blazing violins.

You and I…entwined
between the furious, raging waters
of a past desperately forgotten
and a future being forged.

Your eyes are golden keys
that become warming consolations
to the opening gates
of life’s darkest mysteries.

You can sing the melodies
that capture the tunes of me
and harmonies that whisper
of loving entities.

Together we unite
like rain drops in a storm
becoming only one
conforming to a single chime
that appears like colors in the sky.

To fall more in love with you
and let go of what I’ve held on to
desperately chasing after you
and a place I belong with you.

You can steal my place in time
replacing all my memories
and reaching me
miraculously bringing me to life.

Dance with me within the shadows
of the mid-day sun
revealing the secret
that will never set us apart.

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SsnehaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 29 at 8:36 am
Beautifully written. I love the poem.
Jan. 21 at 4:21 am
brilliant poem..........
Bmiller77 said...
Oct. 13, 2016 at 8:38 am
This is amazing! Your eyes are golden keys stanza is my favorite:)
Blue-jade said...
Jul. 29, 2016 at 4:04 pm
Splendid!! Awsome words
Darqu3ss3 said...
Jul. 28, 2016 at 3:30 am
Wow, I love the word choices you used
KittyKat1419 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 16, 2015 at 10:20 am
You did an amazing job. I really enjoyed reading this:) good job!
BritneyAllison said...
Mar. 17, 2015 at 8:19 am
You did awesome!!! I enjoyed your poem very much I think ill even show it to my friends!!! ^~^
sarah98 said...
Apr. 24, 2013 at 6:39 pm
Tweedle Dee said...
Sept. 3, 2008 at 8:32 pm
wow, amazing. flowed really well, sounded great and i just simply loved it!!!
christine said...
Aug. 25, 2008 at 6:50 pm
Wow. I'm stunned. This is the best poem I've read in a while. Very lyrical, and it spins amazing images in my head as I read. Good work.
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