Ribbons of Pain

July 7, 2011
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Lost in a world,
Where you don't belong.
Trying to do well,
Trying to be strong.

Faces are vague,
Happiness seems to leave.
Wishing for some hope,
Something to believe.

Yesterdays memories,
Seem to be tied.
With ribbons of pain,
Tears that you've cried.

Trying to hold on,
To anything you love.
Trying not to drown,
Tryng to stay above.

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Garnet77 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 1:09 am
Wow. This is really, really good. Your style is so simple and wonderful at the same time. I love your word choice--this is so sad!! But it's also beautiful. I really love this, and I could rant on and on about how much I like this, but I think I'll just favorite this instead. Keep writing!!! :)
matseyb03 replied...
Jul. 24, 2011 at 10:31 pm
Hahah thank you so so much. I've actually stopped writing. Writing block I suppose. I'm going to try and start writing more (:
Alice_C said...
Jul. 13, 2011 at 11:18 pm
Wow this can be lyrics to a song. Can I try to make it into it? I would give you credit.
matseyb03 replied...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 2:27 am
haha well ; sure. (:
matseyb03 replied...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 2:28 am
Keep me updated? (:
Alice_C replied...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 12:45 pm
of course i will
matseyb03 replied...
Jul. 24, 2011 at 10:38 pm
thank  you (:
Alice_C replied...
Aug. 13, 2011 at 1:11 pm
I'm still working on it but I've been kinda busy.
matseyb03 replied...
Aug. 28, 2011 at 11:32 pm
I haven't even been on in forever.
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