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The Worst Day Of My Life

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I regret the day I was born,
born only to face troubles..
born only to spread sorrows..

‘Ma’ may have been my first word
But I could never learn to fly like a



free bird..

Ah! So much I wanted to relish the cake of life
God laughed at me and said, ”You don’t even deserve a bite!”

He took away all the happiness


bit by bit
Yet I only said,” As you wish!”
Don’t worry God! I know you must be a busy man ..I promise I wont ask you for anything ever again…

Today such times have come that I stand all alone..
And a bleak future awaits there to grip my bone..

The worst day of my life it was.. Oh yes it was..
The day I was born..



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tsinger07 said...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 4:28 pm:
I like this a lot! You aren't the only one out there who feels like this. (me). Writing is a great way to let your emotions out. We both feel lost but I will pray for us and others out there like this.  Greatly written by the way.
 
Princess2011 replied...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 11:27 pm :
now that gives a lot of boost..thank you so much...:).. and dont worry.. things will certainly get better..i know for a fact ,... because now that youre praying even God cant overlook such a sweet person's prayers..:) thanks again..
 
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Casual.dreamer said...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 12:52 pm:
i really like this. Lool at my work?
 
Princess2011 replied...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 11:28 pm :
wow! thank you soo much..... and i will definitely check out your work as well...:)
 
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Mariam.J said...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 12:18 am:

Wow, you REALLY regret being born, don't you? :P

Even though I kinda like this poem and the whole imagery thing you've got going on, I don't understand what would make you write something as 'pessimistic' as this :/

It's good, though ( :

Especially the 'Ma' part with the brid and all :)

 
Mariam.J replied...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 12:18 am :
Sorry, bird*
 
Princess2011 replied...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 2:44 am :
When nothing goes right, you face some or the other hurdle at every step you take, your future is like pitch dark, and even God though listens but never responds or ..makes things back to normal and okay again.. well.. then you cant help but give an outlet to your emotions as i did through this poem...but you dont have a magic wand with you..patience..yea... but how much.... i wont say anything more..  oh yea thanks a loooottttttt!!! your every comment means a lot.. makes my ... (more »)
 
Mariam.J replied...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 6:15 am :

Wow, that was a really good answer.

I like the way you pu that.

Well, I feel like that too, alot of the time and what gets me through is that I'm still HERE, on this Earth.

And instead of trying to make MY future better,I try to brighten up someone else's present ( :

And that kinda paves my Yellow Brick Road to Happiness ^^ .

And hey, I don't mind making anyone's week either :)

Cheesy and lame, I know :P

 
Princess2011 replied...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 10:54 am :
you talk beautifully.. and perhaps thats why it shows in your writings too..:)..:)
 
Princess2011 replied...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 10:56 am :
and lol!!..youve already made my life by teaching me a lesson today...:)thanks...:)
 
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