MOTHER

June 29, 2011
By Manish9 SILVER, Kanpur, Other
Manish9 SILVER, Kanpur, Other
6 articles 12 photos 110 comments

Thou, who madest me O'Lord
thou, who brought me forth
Hath moulded her too,
out of the same clay soft .

I worship thou glorious ,
i worship thee proud
But i worship her the most ,
she is the reason i am around .

Her hair is as black as,
thy Diamond studded cape
That thou shelter us with ,
when we cant stay awake.

Her face has the Radiance,
of the Bright spring morn
And the stars of the heavens decend
into her crystal clear Orbs.

the breeze moveth around her ,
like a Graceful maiden doeth
Her tranquil features un-nerved ,
like a New born at it's birth.

Thou who art the greatest ,
bow to her too
As she is the most sacred ,
and thou know that it is true.

She is always there for me,
always caring and praying
Whenever i feel weak and hot,
she is the one who is Slaving.

O Thou art truely great,
to have created her too
Even thee cant live without her, tell me aint it True?

You are with me always, in one form or the other
But in my life , i know you as
no other than my 'MOTHER' !


The author's comments:
I HOPE THAT SOMEWHERE DOWN THE LINE ALL YOU TEEN FEEL THE SAME WAY ABOUT YOUR MOTHER ..... FEEL FREE TO GIVE YOUR OPINIONS AND SHARE WITH ME YOUR FEELINGS !!!

- ILLUMINATUS

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.king. SILVER said...
on Jan. 17 2012 at 3:58 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Favorite Quote:
( ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡°)

I agree, Mother is our first love after God, and his prophet, I'm glad you love your mom as I love mine !

Shivam GOLD said...
on Jan. 16 2012 at 4:03 am
Shivam GOLD, Lucknow, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Its nothing like nothing or all.. its just that how far you climb up the tree before you fall..

Studded with emotions, Good work man....

butterfly123 said...
on Jan. 11 2012 at 8:39 am
butterfly123, Banglore, Other
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hey ! amazing poem! i love my mummy=P

on Jan. 6 2012 at 3:23 am
Zinaidia SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
8 articles 3 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"Whatever you are, be a good one.\\\"

Very strong and emotional! Loved it, and it has a very creative approach! Again, just work on spelling.

on Dec. 23 2011 at 3:55 am
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD, Kegalle, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Never worry if u have or had any bad, bitter experiences, because, that can be what made u perfect or better than how u were.

love is beautiful and u've got great with that.... I like it.. :)

AnshuR SILVER said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 5:35 am
AnshuR SILVER, Thane, Other
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Favorite Quote:
There is nothing to writing.. All you do is sit down at a typewriter and bleed. - Ernest Hemingway

Awesum work...!!!
I loved it alot...

ElectricDtv said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 2:58 am
ElectricDtv, Three Rivers, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
dont really have one

wow dude good job

on Nov. 21 2011 at 7:43 pm
Basketball23 SILVER, Pine Grove, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm living in a shell with no soul" -Three Days Grace (World So Cold)
"Time still turns the pages of the book it's burned" -Avenged Sevenfold (So Far Away)

This is amazing!!!  I love how you used old fashioned words like "thou" and "moveth."  It makes it sound unique :) 

Tigergirl said...
on Sep. 9 2011 at 3:06 pm
Tigergirl, Aurora, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Pepsi....si...si...."

WOW its so from the heart! Once again I love your poem

on Sep. 4 2011 at 5:00 pm
secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
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Favorite Quote:
life had i loved the more
had it but passed away
as quietly as the day
ebbs from the darkening star.


-emanuel litvinoff

wow. i love the style of this... its real formal.

Manish9 SILVER said...
on Jul. 26 2011 at 8:45 am
Manish9 SILVER, Kanpur, Other
6 articles 12 photos 110 comments

THANX 2 BOTH MY FRNDS ...<3<3

 


sakina GOLD said...
on Jul. 13 2011 at 11:32 am
sakina GOLD, Chennai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
A negative thinker See's a difficulty in every opportunity but a positive thinker sees an opportunity in every difficulty. So always think positive and u'll surely B successful in LIFE.
-Hazrat Ali (A.S)

This is awesome...Ur poems have a very special meaning and it has lot's of emotions in it too...:)mind checking out my work again..:)Thanks...:)

on Jul. 12 2011 at 4:35 pm
sherberteater GOLD, Fruita, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Friends are God's way of apologizing to us for our families."

Thank God for friends like you!

Hey, this is really good. I do think that the only reason I am hear on this earth is because of my mother, but you know what? Our Creator, Jesus Christ, is the one who made us. If you want to argue this, go a head. But before you do I just want you to think about one thing. If God had not created Adam or Eve, then where is there mother who created them. God created Adam and Eve, just like how he created you and me. I am not trying  to start a fight with anyone, but just think a bout it.


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