June 29, 2011
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Thou, who madest me O'Lord
thou, who brought me forth
Hath moulded her too,
out of the same clay soft .

I worship thou glorious ,
i worship thee proud
But i worship her the most ,
she is the reason i am around .

Her hair is as black as,
thy Diamond studded cape
That thou shelter us with ,
when we cant stay awake.

Her face has the Radiance,
of the Bright spring morn
And the stars of the heavens decend
into her crystal clear Orbs.

the breeze moveth around her ,
like a Graceful maiden doeth
Her tranquil features un-nerved ,
like a New born at it's birth.

Thou who art the greatest ,
bow to her too
As she is the most sacred ,
and thou know that it is true.

She is always there for me,
always caring and praying
Whenever i feel weak and hot,
she is the one who is Slaving.

O Thou art truely great,
to have created her too
Even thee cant live without her, tell me aint it True?

You are with me always, in one form or the other
But in my life , i know you as
no other than my 'MOTHER' !

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Silver2black said...
Jan. 17, 2012 at 3:58 am
I agree, Mother is our first love after God, and his prophet, I'm glad you love your mom as I love mine !
B-Artistic said...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 4:03 am
Studded with emotions, Good work man....
josika said...
Jan. 11, 2012 at 8:39 am
hey ! amazing poem! i love my mummy=P
Muzee3 said...
Dec. 23, 2011 at 3:55 am
love is beautiful and u've got great with that.... I like it.. :)
AnshuR said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 5:35 am
Awesum work...!!!
I loved it alot...
Dylan H. said...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 2:58 am
wow dude good job
Basketball23 said...
Nov. 21, 2011 at 7:43 pm
This is amazing!!!  I love how you used old fashioned words like "thou" and "moveth."  It makes it sound unique :) 
Tigergirl said...
Sept. 9, 2011 at 3:06 pm
WOW its so from the heart! Once again I love your poem
miracle_of_hope said...
Sept. 4, 2011 at 5:00 pm
wow. i love the style of this... its real formal.
Illuminatus said...
Jul. 26, 2011 at 8:45 am



sherberteater said...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 4:35 pm
Hey, this is really good. I do think that the only reason I am hear on this earth is because of my mother, but you know what? Our Creator, Jesus Christ, is the one who made us. If you want to argue this, go a head. But before you do I just want you to think about one thing. If God had not created Adam or Eve, then where is there mother who created them. God created Adam and Eve, just like how he created you and me. I am not trying  to start a fight with anyone, but just think a bout it.
sakina replied...
Jul. 13, 2011 at 11:32 am
This is awesome...Ur poems have a very special meaning and it has lot's of emotions in it too...:)mind checking out my work again..:)Thanks...:)
Zinaidia replied...
Jan. 6, 2012 at 3:23 am
Very strong and emotional! Loved it, and it has a very creative approach! Again, just work on spelling.
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