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Love Is Pain
July 1, 2011
Love is pain,
some times it is a gain
some people have it in there life
some people feel it toward their wife
I think love is a crazy thing
especially when it means everything
Some day I will truly love
I will love like a dove
a beautiful dove on a pretty day
the dove will not always be this way
many things change in a life time
this is just like mine
© Sarah M., Phoenix, AZ
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This article has 10 comments.
Evilgummysattack GOLD said...
on Dec. 14 2011 at 5:31 pm
It was decent, you are definatly talented. Reach deeper though. I cry sould be undoubtably a cry and a prayer sould be undoubtably a prayer in poetry.
savetheplanet PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 23 2011 at 10:55 am
The poem is sweet but you need to go deeper, it's too much on the surface. Also, the meter could use some work. But for your first try it's actually quite good. :D
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Nov. 14 2011 at 5:12 pm
Hey, that was really good!!! I think though the last line shouldve o r couldve said 'this is just a life like mine.' like, with repitition of the word 'life'. but anyway, it's still cool :)
