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I love to cook,with a lovely look.
My aim was that i had to cook.
I cook for all like a loving mom.
My desire is that i have streaming group.

I own a restaurant in paradise.
Which is held so far for a better look.
People came and tasted my Food,
And then they said Miraculous Food!!!

Whenever i cook it feels so good. And Whenever i cook it tastes so good.
I am someone who loves to cook
For people with an exquisite look for food.:)





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Illuminatus said...
Jul. 9, 2011 at 3:09 am
hmmm .... after reading this beautiful poetry i surely think that we would make very good friends... I LOVE TO EAT , EAT AND EAT ....hey i am not fat though .... :D
 
sakina replied...
Jul. 9, 2011 at 7:20 am
Even I love food..But quite slim..
 
sakina replied...
Jul. 9, 2011 at 7:21 am
I mean *I'm Quite Slim..
 
Alon_Freevoice said...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 5:24 am
I really, really, really like this poem.  I don't know why people have anorexia. I have dis-anorexia (eating too much LOL)

All *I*s should be capitalized tho. You can put your smileys in the author's comment box and not ecatly in the poem. The first line in your third stanza seems to have a problem with the format.

But this poem is all the more good. :) And, oh, you're welcome to come here and cook for me... :)
 
sakina replied...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 9:04 am

Ya ur right about the 3rd stanza I totally messed up with the 1st line actually ..Its like..

It feels so good whenever I cook,


And whenever I cook it taste's so good..

 
yogi1993 said...
Jul. 7, 2011 at 8:47 pm
Nice one.. Im too a food lover... I only know hw to eat, nt to cook :D
 
sakina replied...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 3:44 am
Mikka Nanri..!
 
yogi1993 replied...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 11:05 am
WOW, so tamil eh.. u in facebook??
 
sakina replied...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 12:59 pm
No...'m not in face book...:)
 
RockGirl182This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 5, 2011 at 1:25 pm
This is nice :)
 
sakina replied...
Jul. 5, 2011 at 11:42 pm
Thank you..:)
 
Silent_Artist said...
Jul. 5, 2011 at 8:17 am
I really like it. Put a smile on my face.
 
sakina replied...
Jul. 5, 2011 at 12:12 pm
Thank you...:)With a Bigggggg Smile...:D
 
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