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The Shores of no Sorrow

June 1, 2011
By LillyRose BRONZE, Moorland, Other
LillyRose BRONZE, Moorland, Other
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He walked the shores,
For the very last time,
reflecting on the sight,
all the boast in one line

His mates and fellow soldiers,
All talking and Mourning,
"Why was it his death?"

The crackling quick fire,
of the leaping gun,
Looking at his mates,
Saying his time is done

Why is it we sorrow? Why is it we regret?
But I no, he's someone I'll never forget.
A Solider at war, a husband at heart. I no as a Hero, he and I will never be apart.


The author's comments:
I wrote this Piece as an English class work assignment for our topic War poems. And came up with this Romanticised Poem. My friends really enjoyed it, and My teacher was impressed, so I wouldn't mind showing my proud work, to see what others would say.

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