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A Kiss So Sweet, It's Deadly.

Man,

A three letter

Word.

Pig,

Also three letters,

A much more suitable

Word for the male kind.

They play their games,

Breaking hearts of

Each and every female.

A silent vow,

A promise to myself

And all woman kind,

No man shall ever treat

A woman in such

A way ever

Again.

.:*:.

A kiss,

Something

So very simple,

Delicate,

Vital.

A gesture filled

With a passion

Oh so wild.

An intoxication so

Captivating.

How was the poor

Fool to know

It’s a lethal

Obsession?

It’s the passion that

Draws him in,

Or possibly it’s that

Fanatical grip

That has him seduced?

No matter the reason,

I have him

Right where I want him;

Pleading for the

Taste of my lips.

Who am I to deny

Such a desire?

With murderous lips,

I whisper goodbye,

Sealing it with

One last kiss.



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Fizza_98This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 11:54 am:
right said, men r more than pigs
 
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track4life said...
Jul. 1, 2011 at 4:30 pm:
i really love this... good job!
 
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SMWells said...
Jul. 1, 2011 at 12:13 pm:
I think it's a good poem from a litterairy standpoint.  But I have to disagree with the concept.  Men in the megority are no worse than us.  besides, some of them, believe it or not, are not romantic natured.
 
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MarleneIdalis said...
Jul. 1, 2011 at 1:04 am:
i love the choppiness too :D
 
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-MiMi- said...
Jun. 30, 2011 at 4:52 pm:
Wow..... That's all I can say is wow.....
 
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CatiebuggThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 30, 2011 at 10:41 am:
This is an amazing piece of work.
 
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paperandpen said...
Jun. 29, 2011 at 10:37 pm:
i love how you write so choppy with this. it works great but it also flows too!:) so good:)
 
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Little-Irish-Girl said...
Jun. 29, 2011 at 6:04 pm:
OOOOOOOOH!!! very mysterious and intriguing. Good Job. I love it.
 
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TheEternalDBSK said...
Jun. 29, 2011 at 1:13 pm:
Awesome ^o^
 
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