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Tiny droplets flutter to the ground.
Somehow, unlike rain,
They manage to make no sound.
For children with no school, happiness is found.
In the snow, themselves they entertain.




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JustEmily said...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 10:31 am:
Cute! I love the rhyming
 
PaRaNoRmAl627 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 4:03 pm :
aww thank youu :)
 
DaughterofEvil replied...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 10:00 pm :
Having once spent an entire winter in Russia, I personally love the snow. I liked this cinquain, and am curious to see what you can write in other poetic formats. Keep them coming! ^^
 
PaRaNoRmAl627 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 2:47 pm :
I will :) thank youu!
 
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WriterGirl33 said...
Jul. 1, 2011 at 4:46 pm:
i liked it... it flowed nice.
 
PaRaNoRmAl627 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 4, 2011 at 9:14 pm :
thanksss! :)
 
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BrightBurningCampeadorThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 30, 2011 at 2:58 pm:
I really like it! I have a hard time writing poems in specific formats, like cinquains, so I admire people like you who can write a good poem under such restrictions.
 
PaRaNoRmAl627 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 30, 2011 at 8:09 pm :
thankss :) i had a hard time with it too. it was an assignment for my creative writing class
 
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DarkenRose said...
Jun. 29, 2011 at 1:38 pm:
Very cute:) I always loved the snow but I don't like the cold lol, very nice work:)
 
PaRaNoRmAl627 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 29, 2011 at 5:15 pm :
me toooo!!
 
PaRaNoRmAl627 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 29, 2011 at 5:16 pm :
oh and thank you lol
 
DarkenRose replied...
Jun. 30, 2011 at 2:54 pm :
your very welcome lol:)
 
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.Izzy. said...
Jun. 28, 2011 at 9:11 pm:
This is cute. Living with unpredictable weather, I have grown to dread snow. However, I remember being younger and dreaming about snowdays so I could go outside and build a giant snow fort. This poem brought back memories haha. Keep writing!
 
PaRaNoRmAl627 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 28, 2011 at 9:15 pm :
aww thankss :) my dad owns a snow plowing business so we kinda love snow in my housee :P
 
sakina replied...
Jun. 29, 2011 at 7:25 am :

Really nice:).. but it never snow's where i live.. But i would love to experience it atleast once...

And your poem helps me do so.;)

 
PaRaNoRmAl627 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 29, 2011 at 7:41 am :
aww thankss :)
 
sakina replied...
Jun. 29, 2011 at 7:45 am :

hey check out my poems.. silence and ego kills love,love kills ego.

It's in forum

 
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