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Snow Cinquain

June 6, 2011
By PaRaNoRmAl627 GOLD, Mountainside, New Jersey
PaRaNoRmAl627 GOLD, Mountainside, New Jersey
15 articles 0 photos 297 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do what you want. If it's something you'll regret in the morning, sleep late."


Tiny droplets flutter to the ground.
Somehow, unlike rain,
They manage to make no sound.
For children with no school, happiness is found.
In the snow, themselves they entertain.


The author's comments:
Just a cute wintery poem. Sorry, I know its Summer, but I wrote it a while ago :)

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on Jan. 31 2012 at 4:06 pm
PaRaNoRmAl627 GOLD, Mountainside, New Jersey
15 articles 0 photos 297 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do what you want. If it's something you'll regret in the morning, sleep late."

aww thank youu!

Sail_ BRONZE said...
on Jan. 31 2012 at 1:19 pm
Sail_ BRONZE, Eugene, Oregon
3 articles 10 photos 196 comments
love it! you have a gift!!

on Aug. 21 2011 at 6:06 pm
PaRaNoRmAl627 GOLD, Mountainside, New Jersey
15 articles 0 photos 297 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do what you want. If it's something you'll regret in the morning, sleep late."

thankss! :)

on Aug. 21 2011 at 5:15 pm
wordjunkie BRONZE, Houston, Texas
1 article 0 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
Those who say it can't be done should not interrupt those who are doing it.

Simplistic and sweet- reminds me of childhood snow days :)

on Aug. 19 2011 at 10:10 pm
PaRaNoRmAl627 GOLD, Mountainside, New Jersey
15 articles 0 photos 297 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do what you want. If it's something you'll regret in the morning, sleep late."

aww thank youu! :)

on Aug. 19 2011 at 4:36 pm
Danealle SILVER, Wheeling, Illinois
7 articles 0 photos 119 comments

Favorite Quote:
Anything is possible with a smile and goal in mind.

Simple yet oh so true! Great job!

on Aug. 13 2011 at 10:45 pm
PaRaNoRmAl627 GOLD, Mountainside, New Jersey
15 articles 0 photos 297 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do what you want. If it's something you'll regret in the morning, sleep late."

aww thats what i pictured too :) thanks for readingg!

on Aug. 13 2011 at 12:47 pm
Eno_Bladez GOLD, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
16 articles 1 photo 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
it'll be okay, if it's not okay it's not over.

i love this! i was reading it and in my head i was picturing kids outside playing and beautiful blankets of snow on the goround!

on Aug. 2 2011 at 9:32 pm
PaRaNoRmAl627 GOLD, Mountainside, New Jersey
15 articles 0 photos 297 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do what you want. If it's something you'll regret in the morning, sleep late."

aww thankss! :)

on Aug. 2 2011 at 9:08 pm
callmebaddog SILVER, Spokane, Washington
8 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you'll live forever. Live as if you'll die today.
-James Dean

Very well written, and I love how it compares snow to rain :)!

on Jul. 31 2011 at 2:27 pm
PaRaNoRmAl627 GOLD, Mountainside, New Jersey
15 articles 0 photos 297 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do what you want. If it's something you'll regret in the morning, sleep late."

im sure you cannn :) thanks!

Saysh PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 31 2011 at 1:16 pm
Saysh PLATINUM, Brentwood, California
31 articles 1 photo 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing is a socially acceptable form of schizophrenia." ~E.L. Doctorow

i love how short and simple it is! i can never write short poems, so i really appreciate when a writer can get so much into such a little thing. great job!!!

L. said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 2:18 pm
thanks for readingg!

on Jul. 25 2011 at 6:08 am
Fuggin_Fuggers SILVER, San Jacinto, California
6 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes it not about winning the race,its just being apart of it."
"Life's like an hour glass glued to a table."

i loooove this you should check out my poems i love to here feedback especially cux i read other ppls writing and then i question mine....looooveee thhis

. said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 4:46 pm
aww thankss :)

on Jul. 24 2011 at 4:27 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
19 articles 0 photos 324 comments

Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me

i love it, its refreshing and very sweet! good job! :)

on Jul. 19 2011 at 1:23 pm
PaRaNoRmAl627 GOLD, Mountainside, New Jersey
15 articles 0 photos 297 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do what you want. If it's something you'll regret in the morning, sleep late."

yaayy thank youu! glad you enjoyed itt :D

on Jul. 19 2011 at 9:43 am
DaylightDarkness SILVER, Littleton, Colorado
9 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everyone's crazy. You know why? We all want to be normal. Well, we cant define normal, and, the people you can point at and say, well isn't he/she normal are rare. Doesnt that kind of defeat the pupose of normal? -My Friend

This is really good. I liked the way you said things without explicitly saying them. Your style is really unique and clever!

on Jul. 18 2011 at 10:28 pm
PaRaNoRmAl627 GOLD, Mountainside, New Jersey
15 articles 0 photos 297 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do what you want. If it's something you'll regret in the morning, sleep late."

aww thats so cutee! hehe thanks for readingg :)

on Jul. 18 2011 at 10:15 pm
whitstar27 GOLD, Edison, New Jersey
15 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
when life gives you lemons, make grape juice. Then step back and let the world wonder how you did it
and
when life gives you lemon, throw them back at life

I like this poem. It was a format that you don't see as much, which I liked. It also reminded me of being a little kid and playing in the snow till my fingers were numb.


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