Newborn Baby

May 20, 2011
By DarkPandaAngel GOLD, Camp Hill, Pennsylvania
DarkPandaAngel GOLD, Camp Hill, Pennsylvania
14 articles 2 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"How dreadful" Cedric Diggory in A Very Potter Musical
"Ello puppet." Pirates of the Carribean

Words can not describe this feeling,
It makes my head go reeling.
For hours and hours and hours,
Even during the shower,
This feeling won’t go away.

I try and put my tongue around it,
But that takes way to long so I sit.
I try to show it in actions,
But I didn’t get the right reactions.
So I get down and lay.

Lying still I try to picture it in my head,
But all I could see was the color red.
So I tried to draw it with a purple pen,
But I couldn’t draw anything back then.
So I went outside to play.

For I considered that maybe,
Words couldn’t describe this feeling,
Of looking at a newborn baby.
And even though my head is still reeling,
I think I might want the feeling to stay.

The author's comments:
So this poem popped into my head one morning. When I read it I think of a brother or sister looking at their new brother and sister and not really getting the new feeling they might have for them but still wanting to have it.

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on Jun. 30 2011 at 10:06 pm
Fangstorm_The_Vampire GOLD, Tehachapi, California
15 articles 1 photo 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's a bird!
It's a midget!
NO. it's...... EDWARD ELRIC.

A. I like it. Well written. B. I know the day a random song popped into my head. It is now Wings, which is posted on Teenink. I just wrote it immediately in my head as I was submitting it.


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