The Magic Man

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I'm stuck in this world
Where I've lost my way
And I don't know which way to go
Guidance i need
Answers I'd die for
I crave direction
I have to find a way out
I'm so confused
But anxious to find a way out
I need to find someone..Anyone
Instead i find no one
I look around for something..Anything
Instead I find nothing
There isn't anything in sight
It's like I've gone blind
I feel like I've lost my mind
I look to my left..nothing
I look to my right..no one
I look down..nada
But then I look up,,
And something catches my eye
A big, bright light shining down on me
Then i see a man
He grabs hold of my hand
And tells me everything will be alright
In that moment of time
I feel safe again
i look all around me and i can see everything
Thanks to the Magic Man from above..





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writingchick This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 25, 2011 at 9:56 pm
You use great descriptions! When the main character was confused so was I. When everything made sense again I wasn't confused!! Great job. Would you mind checking out my poem "footprints"? Thanks (:
 
UnknownPoet13 replied...
Jul. 29, 2011 at 4:31 pm
haha thanks! thats what i was going for! :) and yes i will look at your poem!
 
windsoftime said...
Jul. 25, 2011 at 3:14 pm
Wow! Seriously that is an amazing piece of work! Are you writing anymore? You used my favourite word. Can you take a look at some of my work and tell me what you think?
 
UnknownPoet13 replied...
Jul. 29, 2011 at 4:30 pm
thank you that means alot! :) I will definetly look at some of your work! and what's your favorite word? aha
 
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