The Magic Man

May 30, 2011
By loveaysia BRONZE, Sydney, Other
loveaysia BRONZE, Sydney, Other
4 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Wanting To Be Someone Else Is A Waste Of The Person You Are.


I'm stuck in this world
Where I've lost my way
And I don't know which way to go
Guidance i need
Answers I'd die for
I crave direction
I have to find a way out
I'm so confused
But anxious to find a way out
I need to find someone..Anyone
Instead i find no one
I look around for something..Anything
Instead I find nothing
There isn't anything in sight
It's like I've gone blind
I feel like I've lost my mind
I look to my left..nothing
I look to my right..no one
I look down..nada
But then I look up,,
And something catches my eye
A big, bright light shining down on me
Then i see a man
He grabs hold of my hand
And tells me everything will be alright
In that moment of time
I feel safe again
i look all around me and i can see everything
Thanks to the Magic Man from above..


The author's comments:
I hope you enjoyed it! If you have any suggestions please tell me, I love criticism!(spell check) If you have title suggestions please tell me those too. Comment how you feel about it!

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on Jul. 29 2011 at 4:31 pm
loveaysia BRONZE, Sydney, Other
4 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Wanting To Be Someone Else Is A Waste Of The Person You Are.

haha thanks! thats what i was going for! :) and yes i will look at your poem!

on Jul. 29 2011 at 4:30 pm
loveaysia BRONZE, Sydney, Other
4 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Wanting To Be Someone Else Is A Waste Of The Person You Are.

thank you that means alot! :) I will definetly look at some of your work! and what's your favorite word? aha

on Jul. 25 2011 at 9:56 pm
writingchick GOLD, Huntington, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Faith is taking another step without seeing the entire staircase."

You use great descriptions! When the main character was confused so was I. When everything made sense again I wasn't confused!! Great job. Would you mind checking out my poem "footprints"? Thanks (:

windsoftime said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 3:14 pm
Wow! Seriously that is an amazing piece of work! Are you writing anymore? You used my favourite word. Can you take a look at some of my work and tell me what you think?


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