Understanding

May 22, 2011
By JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin


The trees stood strong like massive unmovable pillars,




sunlight rained like golden droplets through the trees,




the forest is filled with din,





I could sense life,




leaves rustled,


everything had a rhythm,



even if I didn’t see life I felt it,





I know I should’ve turned back right there,




but I felt at ease here in this enchanted place,




I wandered aimlessly for hours,




then I was lost,




I drifted in circles,




I stumbled into a space,




the sun was just falling into the treetops,




it’s last rays streaming through the massive trunks,




I didn’t know what to do,





while I was crying,




I felt a presence spying,




I looked up and I stopped,




while I stood with my face ashen,




a wolf stood there,




what will I do?





will this be my end?





tales of girls in red hoods and three pigs bashed at my head,





I didn’t move I barely breathed,




we both stood there as if captured in a spell,




the wolf stood there piercing my soul without it’s gaze faltering,



it stood like a statue,




it’s magnificent form was solid,




it was clearly filled with unmovable pride,




the sun outlined the beast in a golden radiance,




it backed away and slowly pointed it’s face in a direction,



I had a feeling it was showing me the way back,





I inched away and went the way I was shown,




as I walked back I felt it’s eyes never leave my back,





now I had an understanding of this feared animal.


The author's comments:
This is an old piece I wrote since then my writing has improved tell me what you think. :)

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on Jun. 17 2012 at 9:09 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
35 articles 0 photos 782 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

Hey thanks for reading (even though this was a year ago my computor was jacked up and wouldn't always post replies)

on Jul. 8 2011 at 6:31 pm
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
41 articles 0 photos 650 comments

Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

And, oh, the ones who are feeared are the one who are actually innocent. People look at each other in different ways...

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on Jul. 8 2011 at 6:29 pm
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
41 articles 0 photos 650 comments

Favorite Quote:
‎"I’m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don’t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world." - Beyoncé

Some use its instead of it's. In your case, you use it's instead of its.

Anyway, this poem is so true. Sometimes, the ones who are called idiots are the ones who really know what's happening... :)


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