Tainted Tears

June 14, 2011
By Blooddrinker9755 PLATINUM, Batavia, Ohio
Blooddrinker9755 PLATINUM, Batavia, Ohio
26 articles 7 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Tears are words the heart can't express”


In this useless atmosphere, I lay here dying ever so slowly. Listening to what makes me mournful. Clouded with bittersweet thoughts, tears cringe down my pale cheeks. I feel feeble. My love is strong but my will isn't. I can't linger on to this mortal lie. Lies become Truths. The truth has often left me bitter while the lies comfort me even in my darkest hours. Even though how much pain the truth will bring, I still want to know in my time of depression. My heart bleeds of love unspoken. other besides my heart spilling inaudible words, my blood covers the floors of home.

The author's comments:
I was listening to really sad music and at that time stuff was hitting the fan so I wrote this a couple years ago. It just came to me. I needed to write what I was feeling and here comes out a scary poem that even freaked out my mother. To me its just another work of a teenager with experience. Again it had been judged too many times.

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on Jun. 20 2011 at 8:42 am
Blooddrinker9755 PLATINUM, Batavia, Ohio
26 articles 7 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Tears are words the heart can't express”

thanks!!! for your advice

on Jun. 20 2011 at 8:41 am
Blooddrinker9755 PLATINUM, Batavia, Ohio
26 articles 7 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Tears are words the heart can't express”

thank you, this is my first time being on here and I had tons of poetry on my room that needed to show themselves. I kinda wanted to be known.

on Jun. 20 2011 at 8:40 am
Blooddrinker9755 PLATINUM, Batavia, Ohio
26 articles 7 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Tears are words the heart can't express”

thank you!!!

Ahhni PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 18 2011 at 7:37 pm
Ahhni PLATINUM, Battle Creek, Michigan
21 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your naked body should only belong to those who fall in love with your naked soul."
- Charlie Chaplin

I had chills while reading this poem.  Your writing is very fluent, and I enjoyed reading this.  I can tell that you put a lot of emotion into this.  I like that about poetry.

gleek1234 GOLD said...
on Jun. 18 2011 at 10:25 am
gleek1234 GOLD, Burlington, Vermont
17 articles 0 photos 130 comments

Favorite Quote:
You did let me go you left me broken and heartless, crying out for help, with no one to answer my calls-Shilpa Pierpont-Hale ( poem) Love hurts

This is really good but really sad! I feel Like I can actually sense what your feeling it like I have become you while reading his beautiful poem! This is a work if art! Amazing job!

on Jun. 17 2011 at 10:45 pm
Sunrise69Sunset BRONZE, Rockwood, Tennessee
2 articles 7 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
I think it pisses God off if we walk by the color purple in a field somewhere and don't notice it. . . People think pleasing God is the only thing God cares about. But any fool in the world can see it always trying to please us back. -Alice Walker '82

Anything that comes from yourself is a good poem and shouldn't be judged badly. Some may not like it, but people have an opinion about everything. So naturally not everyone is going to like yours but I do .


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