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Why it rains before the season?
for those unlucky hearts that die for no reason,
that’s when the earth recieves the rains before the
season.

For the ears that heard the cries,
For the unfulfilled, left dreams and the umpteenth tries.
That’s when the sky pours down,
Cause the waiting heart frown.

The eyes that were once filled with dreams ,
Years passed by but no one answered to their screams.
Every time I feel what I have got and they have missed,
They lost so fast faded those roses to be kissed.

Time will move on like waves in the sea,
Some hearts made the seen unseen.
For the hearts that beats no more,
They still knocked the unopened doors.

For the hearts who left us for no reason,
Make the sky choke to tears before the season.
Things that remain untold, relationships that remain unfold.
Now they realize the gap,
That they should have been shortened before the mishap.

The distances that suddenly been into miles,
The hearts who lost the smiles.
Still they are waiting for that cause to end,
Still they want to find the real in this pretend.

For the hearts who left for no reason,
Make us realise that people still decieving and showing treason.
So every time when we look forward to happy endings,
It’s just so precious to absorb all the moments pending.

For those who are engrossed , to look around,
One day they will experience the soul’s unsound.
Cause they are the one’s who went away without any reason,
That’s the cause why it rains before the season.




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nene937 said...
Aug. 14, 2011 at 8:21 pm:
this is great i think this would be a great profession for you
 
afflatus replied...
Aug. 14, 2011 at 11:57 pm :
oh that's very thoughtful of u to say...but today who needs a poet..
 
nene937 replied...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 6:12 pm :
there will always be someone in the world who love to read poetry 
 
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sakshi said...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 1:41 pm:

its gud supreeti!!!

keep going!

 
afflatus replied...
Jul. 30, 2011 at 1:45 pm :
hey thanx for ur motivation..that's all i need..,<3
 
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alpana said...
Jul. 25, 2011 at 10:43 am:
its greattt supreeti...nice going!!!!!:))...i hav rated 5!
 
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amit.shk.91 said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 7:38 am:

faad hai yaar....!! great control over words....nice poem...

 

 

 
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Bhushan said...
Jun. 19, 2011 at 2:21 am:
Very emotional poem, which touches my heart to feel the zest!!!!!!!!
 
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Kunal said...
Jun. 18, 2011 at 8:41 pm:
Great poetry n it has actually made me believe that untimely unexpected rains pour for a reason
 
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jasmin101 said...
Jun. 18, 2011 at 2:27 am:
great!!!! amazing
 
afflatus replied...
Jun. 18, 2011 at 2:42 am :
thanx dear......share it among ur friends if u can :-)
 
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Tarun said...
Jun. 17, 2011 at 12:35 pm:

Ossum Work Dear!~~~~~~~~~!!

 

(^_^)

 
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mansi said...
Jun. 17, 2011 at 10:55 am:
 its awsom
 
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jyotish said...
Jun. 17, 2011 at 9:30 am:
grt work.....
 
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Harshi said...
Jun. 17, 2011 at 8:55 am:

Awesome Supreeti!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

gudwrk yr..................:))

 
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ktrox said...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 3:20 pm:
this is touching and enthralling..your poetic skills are worth appreciating and rewarding please keep up the good work :)
 
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Radhika said...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 3:17 pm:
Nice written sweety... Keep it up...good going...!!!!
 
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neha said...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 1:04 pm:
nice!!!! :)
 
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nikink said...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 12:49 pm:
awesome work
 
afflatus replied...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 1:02 pm :
thanx do promote it........everyone....appreciate it...
 
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