why it rains before the season?

May 17, 2011
By afflatus SILVER, Bhopal, Other
afflatus SILVER, Bhopal, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Be honest. It's one of the few things in life you can control.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!but it doesn't happen like this,.....


Why it rains before the season?
for those unlucky hearts that die for no reason,
that’s when the earth recieves the rains before the
season.

For the ears that heard the cries,
For the unfulfilled, left dreams and the umpteenth tries.
That’s when the sky pours down,
Cause the waiting heart frown.

The eyes that were once filled with dreams ,
Years passed by but no one answered to their screams.
Every time I feel what I have got and they have missed,
They lost so fast faded those roses to be kissed.

Time will move on like waves in the sea,
Some hearts made the seen unseen.
For the hearts that beats no more,
They still knocked the unopened doors.

For the hearts who left us for no reason,
Make the sky choke to tears before the season.
Things that remain untold, relationships that remain unfold.
Now they realize the gap,
That they should have been shortened before the mishap.

The distances that suddenly been into miles,
The hearts who lost the smiles.
Still they are waiting for that cause to end,
Still they want to find the real in this pretend.

For the hearts who left for no reason,
Make us realise that people still decieving and showing treason.
So every time when we look forward to happy endings,
It’s just so precious to absorb all the moments pending.

For those who are engrossed , to look around,
One day they will experience the soul’s unsound.
Cause they are the one’s who went away without any reason,
That’s the cause why it rains before the season.


The author's comments:
this poetry about some unlucky people who die every year for no reason.
they leave us without giving any reason and only left with us is sorrow and pain. this pain is also expressed by the nature and the sky and the rain.
this untimely rain is the proof of the unfair that is done.

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Ashok said...
on Jun. 17 2015 at 2:31 am
Touching one.. Had to read two times to understand d meaning ...great wrtting skills .. Loved it..

nene937 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 17 2011 at 6:12 pm
nene937 BRONZE, Dayton, Ohio
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When you love something no matter how much it hurts sometimes you have to let it go!!!!!!!!!

there will always be someone in the world who love to read poetry 

on Aug. 14 2011 at 11:57 pm
afflatus SILVER, Bhopal, Other
5 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be honest. It's one of the few things in life you can control.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!but it doesn't happen like this,.....

oh that's very thoughtful of u to say...but today who needs a poet..

nene937 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 14 2011 at 8:21 pm
nene937 BRONZE, Dayton, Ohio
3 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
When you love something no matter how much it hurts sometimes you have to let it go!!!!!!!!!

this is great i think this would be a great profession for you

on Jul. 30 2011 at 1:45 pm
afflatus SILVER, Bhopal, Other
5 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be honest. It's one of the few things in life you can control.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!but it doesn't happen like this,.....

hey thanx for ur motivation..that's all i need..,<3

sakshi said...
on Jul. 30 2011 at 1:41 pm

its gud supreeti!!!

keep going!


alpana said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 10:43 am
its greattt supreeti...nice going!!!!!:))...i hav rated 5!

amit.shk.91 said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 7:38 am

faad hai yaar....!! great control over words....nice poem...

 

 


katy said...
on Jun. 19 2011 at 12:49 pm
yeah..u r absolutely rt mr.king

Bhushan said...
on Jun. 19 2011 at 2:21 am
Very emotional poem, which touches my heart to feel the zest!!!!!!!!

Kunal said...
on Jun. 18 2011 at 8:41 pm
Great poetry n it has actually made me believe that untimely unexpected rains pour for a reason

afflatus said...
on Jun. 18 2011 at 2:42 am
thanx dear......share it among ur friends if u can :-)

jasso GOLD said...
on Jun. 18 2011 at 2:27 am
jasso GOLD, Damascus, Other
16 articles 10 photos 68 comments

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courge dose not always roar, Sometimes courge is a quiet voice at the end of the day saying : i will try again tomorrow

great!!!! amazing

Tarun said...
on Jun. 17 2011 at 12:35 pm

Ossum Work Dear!~~~~~~~~~!!

 

(^_^)


mansi said...
on Jun. 17 2011 at 10:55 am
 its awsom

jyotish said...
on Jun. 17 2011 at 9:30 am
grt work.....

Harshi said...
on Jun. 17 2011 at 8:55 am

Awesome Supreeti!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

gudwrk yr..................:))


ktrox said...
on Jun. 16 2011 at 3:20 pm
this is touching and enthralling..your poetic skills are worth appreciating and rewarding please keep up the good work :)

Radhika said...
on Jun. 16 2011 at 3:17 pm
Nice written sweety... Keep it up...good going...!!!!

neha said...
on Jun. 16 2011 at 1:04 pm
nice!!!! :)


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