A Girl That Loved

May 13, 2011
By KrazyGurl SILVER, Holyoke, Massachusetts
KrazyGurl SILVER, Holyoke, Massachusetts
8 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
" you must let go off your past in order to have a future"


I don't know why i write about love
when all i do is look at the heavens above
i've never felt so lost
loving him is the cost
i over think, maybe
but now he never calls me baby
i cant explain how it happen
i wasn't suppose to fall so deep
but there something in the way he looks at me
Its as if he had a peep hole
that looks right into my soul
My soldier he is
his warm heartbeat i miss
he stole my heart
i just hope he don't tear it apart
only a girl who loved will know what i mean
because it something they've seen
it a story i cant explain
that why i had to jump out this plane



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on Oct. 3 2011 at 2:24 pm
Kortny_Mae GOLD, Davenport, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm not short!...I'm fun sized!!!!!"

i think it was pretty good, and yes it does show ur emotions at the time really well, but alot of good peotry comes from ur emotions, really good keep it up :)

Sunset SILVER said...
on Jun. 16 2011 at 7:41 am
Sunset SILVER, Holyoke, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"the only fear in this world is fear itself"
"loved you once, love you still, always have, always will"

i love it geo, its really good.

on Jun. 15 2011 at 10:31 am
KrazyGurl SILVER, Holyoke, Massachusetts
8 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
" you must let go off your past in order to have a future"

Now that i read this i can truly see how hurt i was when i wrote this

 



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