For the Girls

May 12, 2011
Here's a poem for all the girls
Who are tired of all the boys
That play around with hearts
Like their personal little toys

The ones who break our trust
Like high scores on their stupid games
And just when you've found the exception
You realize they're all the same

Here's a shout-out to the good guys
If you even still exist
Come save us from the douchebags
We wish we'd never kissed

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megsloveslions said...
Aug. 15, 2011 at 6:11 pm
Really good! I love how it rhymes and flows but isn't cheesy, plus it shows some of your personality! I'd love it if you would check out some of my work! I always love feedback!
FreedomIsMyVirtue said...
Aug. 12, 2011 at 5:43 pm
I'm not sure about the last line. But this poem is great! I love the flow and words you used. There's a litle sarcasm and it added to the spice! I've never been in a relationship yet, but I can feel how you feel. So, keep writing :)))
RandomInspiration replied...
Aug. 12, 2011 at 5:53 pm
Thanks so much it always feels great to get good feedback :)
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