Unwanted Love

May 2, 2011
By ShontelleSymone GOLD, New Castle, Pennsylvania
ShontelleSymone GOLD, New Castle, Pennsylvania
15 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Are you chasing your dreams? Or are your dreams chasing you?" - Michelle Phan


I want to love you I really do
Then I think of all the pain you put me through
I start to feel this anger burning
My heart speeding, my stomach churning
It seems as though I'm never learning
For your words have something over me
I'm sinking in unwanted love up to my knee
I do not want to love at all
And yet I'm always there whenever you call



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on Dec. 5 2014 at 10:19 am
needyoumorethandope97 SILVER, Clarkston, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Love is a feeling a million words could not describe - me and my friend hannah
Confidence is a Stain you can't wipe off - Lil Wayne

this is so relatable its exactly how ive felt for 3 years now

on Aug. 14 2011 at 7:18 pm
ShontelleSymone GOLD, New Castle, Pennsylvania
15 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Are you chasing your dreams? Or are your dreams chasing you?" - Michelle Phan

Thank you! This actually had more of a rhythm when I wrote it. I took out a line because I felt iot was awkward. I over-think a lot when I write.

on Aug. 3 2011 at 9:48 pm
DifferentTeen PLATINUM, Seaford, Delaware
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Favorite Quote:
"There’s no such thing as true love, just spurts of insanity—falling over and over again, thinking that won’t happen to me"

I love the rhymes, and the word choices are great. It would be even better if there was more rhythm to it. Nevertheless, awesome love poem!


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