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Unwanted Love

I want to love you I really do
Then I think of all the pain you put me through
I start to feel this anger burning
My heart speeding, my stomach churning
It seems as though I'm never learning
For your words have something over me
I'm sinking in unwanted love up to my knee
I do not want to love at all
And yet I'm always there whenever you call



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needyoumorethandope97This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 5 at 10:19 am
this is so relatable its exactly how ive felt for 3 years now
 
DifferentTeenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 9:48 pm
I love the rhymes, and the word choices are great. It would be even better if there was more rhythm to it. Nevertheless, awesome love poem!
 
ShontelleSymone replied...
Aug. 14, 2011 at 7:18 pm
Thank you! This actually had more of a rhythm when I wrote it. I took out a line because I felt iot was awkward. I over-think a lot when I write.
 
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