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lifelike ocean

May 31, 2011
By tannernelson BRONZE, Liberty Twp, Ohio
tannernelson BRONZE, Liberty Twp, Ohio
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Cold as ice,

Splash!
Times of nice,
Times of mean.

To some an escape,
Others its like a grave.

Oceans range,
High points,
Low points.

Like me until the day I die.

The author's comments:
how life can change at any time like an ocean

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on Jul. 28 2011 at 10:38 pm
JenelleW BRONZE, Camarillo, California
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Favorite Quote:
"You are born with only half a heart. You have to find the other half on your own"-Unknown

This is really good!! I cud really see the metaphors. Great work[: