Magazine, website & books written by teens since 1989

Waves of Blue

Custom User Avatar
More by this author
Waves of blue
Tumble over me.
At first they're nothing,
Just bumps in the ocean.
But then they rage,
Then they swell,
Rising higher
And higher,
Before the crash.




Join the Discussion


This article has 4 comments. Post your own!

mattisonteeterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 14, 2011 at 6:45 pm:
Incredible. Reading it makes me feel relaxed and calm yet intrigued.
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
Authorgal98 said...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 10:43 pm:
Beautiful! I love the way you describe the waves. You are an amazing poet please keep it up.
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
Healing_Angel This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 10, 2011 at 5:27 am:
Once again, this is brilliant and I love it! Your work still makes me cry, but in a good way... I've read your work so many times, I've lost count. You express my own thoughts so beautifully, I'm drawn to it... This is me right now... Take Care.
 
JubilexThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 11, 2011 at 3:30 am :
Thank you :)
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
Site Feedback