First Day Writing a Good Story

May 3, 2011
I was 9 years-old when i was writing.
People said it was about me dieing.
Who ever said that started laughing.
Then his friends started laughing.
So i said that was corny.
Then he got mad and took his tray of macaroni.
My clothes was coverd with cheese.
So i started to run and leave.
I was sad ang lonly.
i wanted to be with my girlfriend.
Then she found me and said,"It's okay your safe with me."
I was not sad, i was happy.
Then I said," i now that already."
Then she Smiled at me.





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Nick5 said...
Dec. 29, 2011 at 12:49 pm
Your spelling is a little wonky: "dieing," "Who ever," "
 
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