First Day Writing a Good Story

May 3, 2011
By Spike9110 BRONZE, Bronx, New York
Spike9110 BRONZE, Bronx, New York
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Favorite Quote:
This world needs to be a better place for children.


I was 9 years-old when i was writing.
People said it was about me dieing.
Who ever said that started laughing.
Then his friends started laughing.
So i said that was corny.
Then he got mad and took his tray of macaroni.
My clothes was coverd with cheese.
So i started to run and leave.
I was sad ang lonly.
i wanted to be with my girlfriend.
Then she found me and said,"It's okay your safe with me."
I was not sad, i was happy.
Then I said," i now that already."
Then she Smiled at me.



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on Dec. 29 2011 at 12:49 pm
camohunter19 GOLD, Sedro-Woolley, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Girls are so queer you never know what they mean. They say No when they mean Yes, and drive a man out of his wits for the fun of it." "Violence is never the answer! It is a question, and the answer is yes."

Your spelling is a little wonky: "dieing," "Who ever," "


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