Wrong and Right

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What is this combination of syllables that I always hear?

The right I am rewarded for

The wrong brings punishment I fear

But what is wrong and what is right?

One is day and one is night.

The right is happy, just like a sunny day

All the troubles just melt away

The wrong is dark, just like night

Bringing out hatred and fright

A transformation made by Man

To mark the difference between can’t and can

But I learn from all wrongs, as I prosper from my right

Maybe neither one is dark and neither one is bright





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RKRK said...
Jun. 19, 2011 at 6:12 pm
Excellent thoughts! Your use of rhyming adds a certain fluency to these intruiging ideas!
 
AK47 said...
Jun. 8, 2011 at 4:00 pm
Chee, this poem is rather pensive. I like your usage of verbal contrast.
 
kvk123 said...
Jun. 7, 2011 at 1:47 pm
Very thought-provoking piece! Would love to see more!!!
 
T.H. said...
Jun. 7, 2011 at 10:59 am
Nice message.
 
Srini V said...
Jun. 7, 2011 at 12:26 am
This is excellent poetry!!!!
 
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