"This is Just to Say"

May 1, 2011
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I have taken
Your wallet
By force,
In the alley

And Which
You probably
To get home.

Forgive me,
It was
So temting
And so filled,
With riches.

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brax34 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 6, 2011 at 11:45 am
very good! it just doesn't seem as if there's a strong enough ending. it's like there's no closure. you end by talking about the temptation, but not your realization that it was wrong, which would most likely end it a little better. still four stars though!
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