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The Unseeing

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Out of the darkness comes a thin haze of light
have you finally found me?
Strengthening, I approach cautious, but feel no fear.
And all the anger melts away.
No longer unknowing, and ultimately seeing
that it is you, your hand offered with hope.

I beg you-

Ponder my quest,
it is bold,
it is great.
In the world that I live in
am I alone,
or are you out there?

My future is waiting,
should I be cautious,
or without fear?
All this making me angry.
The unknowing,
the unseeing.

Tell me my purpose,
my destiny’s ending.
My life-a story.
I’m threatening to collapse
under the stress of waiting
under the wait of watching.
Tell me.



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ConqueringFears said...
Jul. 27, 2011 at 12:58 pm:
just realized that in the author's comments i put the same thing twice . . . oh well :D
 
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GangstaEyes This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 27, 2011 at 9:05 am:
I like this a lot. Its like you're daring to question the future and what lies ahead for you. :) Great job, keep writing!
 
ConqueringFears replied...
Jul. 27, 2011 at 12:57 pm :
thanks :D i feel like thats all so many people ever do; question the future. never live in the moment. im working on that, though :P
 
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drivenbiimusic said...
May 24, 2011 at 10:57 am:
Comment :D? Please :)
 
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