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Good Night Moon

As the sun goes down and moves away
it's time for the stars to come out and play,
dancing in the sky of a moonlight night
stars cast out their sparkling light,
their flashing smiles and glittering laughter
shed fairytale endings of forever after,
their dance ending and the sun coming soon
the shooting stars whisper, good night moon.



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writefearless said...
Jul. 22, 2013 at 11:37 am
the imagery is wonderful :)
 
Court901 said...
Jun. 7, 2013 at 12:49 pm
Awesome way to describe night. This is very cute and full of joy.
 
sarah98This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 6, 2013 at 7:54 pm
sweet and just...happy. Made me smile:)
 
nelehjr said...
Jun. 4, 2013 at 9:48 am
I love this poem simply because it feels happy. Therefore it makes me feel happy. I like how you barrowed the name of this poem from an old childrens book and breathed new life into the phrase Goodnight Moon.
 
bree_breeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 5, 2013 at 5:25 pm
It was one of my favorite books as a kid, i just had to write a poem honoring it. I thought it turned out verry well
 
SuNshiNe007 said...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 9:09 am
Wow! I love it!:) I love the description alot too! You are a unique writer!:)
 
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