Are you as beautiful as your words?

April 17, 2011
By J-Poetry-R SILVER, Enterprise, Alabama
J-Poetry-R SILVER, Enterprise, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
"My greatest writings are on the pages of life"
- J-Poetry-R


are you beautiful,
your words surely are,
their a field of flowers,
stretching out as far
as my unworthy eye can see,
such a perfect portrait,
i pray the artists is as well,
i love to just visualize,
the story your work so splendidly tell,
I'm caught in a trans,
i struggle to breathe,
because your words are so breathtaking,
and suck the life out of me,
so are you beautiful,
of yourself do describe,
only a beauty can create beauty,
unless all your words shield a lie,
i I'magine you under the moonlight,
or as a raisin in the sun,
spell-bounding in both shades,
my heart you've won,
this may sound shallow,
but i just want proof,
that your face matches your soul,
of both beauty and truth,
anonymous writer of woeing verse,
answer my question no matter how absurd,
but are you as beautiful as your words...



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Kipitama said...
on Feb. 15 2012 at 8:47 am
Kipitama, Council Bluffs, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind." (Bartoletti, Campbell)

Yeah there were spelling errors, but I didn't mind. And also, I think I kind of like the simplicity of the words. That's just how the poem is, a simple question that reaches the heart. Great job! ;)

on Nov. 14 2011 at 6:33 pm
J-Poetry-R SILVER, Enterprise, Alabama
6 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My greatest writings are on the pages of life"
- J-Poetry-R

thx for the critique and honest feedback. Lol I didn't think anyone read my old work but I appreciate it

Fayrouz SILVER said...
on Nov. 12 2011 at 3:45 pm
Fayrouz SILVER, Fargo, North Dakota
9 articles 12 photos 364 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Only dead fish swim with the stream"

Very deep and unique, but I did find mistakes (grammar/spelling) that did kind of irritate me :) The theme is soft, but profound, although I think you can improve this by adding better word choice so that it evokes stronger feelings. Great job and keep writing!


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