Complications

April 29, 2011
Goodbye is the hardest part, it’s never forever
But every hello is a fresh new start
We can’t get it together.

We are suddenly deaf and blind,
Minds intertwined
And the only things guiding us are the hands of time.

Why are you so deciduous, so mysterious
You change your mind more than the leaves change with the seasons.

Is it the distance between us that keeps you urging and thirsting
Or does it simply leave you vexing and irking?

Let me know, because my soul is yearning
And right now, it feels as if my heart is spurning.

Although in the end, it’s beautiful, it’s perfect,
Our senses returned and we can hear and see again
So careful yet so adolescent
And it was all completely worth it.





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littlejost said...
Jun. 15, 2011 at 2:53 pm
This poem is absolutely beautiful!  It has so much feeling to it.  This author has a lot of talent and will go far!
 
mimisally said...
Jun. 7, 2011 at 5:32 pm
What a remarkable poem!  To use the word "deciduous" to describe a person is very creative and original.  This teen has REAL talent and maturity.
 
grandmajan said...
May 24, 2011 at 6:00 pm
wonderfull!! i am so impressed with the maturity in this poem. this girl is goin' places!
 
msalex said...
May 24, 2011 at 10:43 am
This poem is absolutely phenomenal!!! You are so unbelievably talented...
 
nnc97 said...
May 21, 2011 at 12:03 pm
I dont even know how to explain it, bt this is an awesome poem
 
roliepoliezoie replied...
May 23, 2011 at 3:33 pm
Thank you!
 
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