Love is like a Death Trap

April 18, 2011
By SimplyRachel PLATINUM, Charlotte, North Carolina
SimplyRachel PLATINUM, Charlotte, North Carolina
48 articles 6 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery and today is a gift, that's why we call it the present."
~Unknown
"Things change, friends leave, and life doesn't stop for anybody."
~Stepgen Chbosky


Love is like a death trap.
It surrounds you, swallowing you up like an ocean.
Making you blind to all but that person.
It tears you limb from limb.
It throws all you've ever worked for away!
It shoves you down a deep, dark, cold hole.
While whispering sweet nothings in your ear.
Love makes you insane, nervous, scared, happy, sad, angry, anxious.
Love is an emotional death trap!
It squeezes you like an Anaconda starting to devour its prey.
Closing up the world to you.
Love is like a death trap,
Need I say more?


The author's comments:
I have some bad experiences with love.

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on May. 17 2011 at 3:54 pm
SimplyRachel PLATINUM, Charlotte, North Carolina
48 articles 6 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery and today is a gift, that's why we call it the present."
~Unknown
"Things change, friends leave, and life doesn't stop for anybody."
~Stepgen Chbosky

You should read my lother version odf this. It should be on here too

on May. 17 2011 at 3:51 pm
FarFromIdealGirl SILVER, Boston, Massachusetts
5 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
When I was a young man, I wanted to change the world. I found it was difficult to change the world, so I tried to change my nation. When I found I couldn't change the nation, I began to focus on my town. I couldn't change the town and as an older man, I tried to change my family. Now, as an old man, I realize the only thing I can change is myself, and suddenly I realize that if long ago I had changed myself, I could have made an impact on my family. My family and I could have made an impact on our town. Their impact could have changed the nation and I could indeed have changed the world."

perfect. i can relate so well to this it isnt even funny, keep it up!

on May. 16 2011 at 3:55 pm

that was very good, reminded me of a similar experiance. very good though!

 


EmilyGrau GOLD said...
on May. 15 2011 at 9:41 am
EmilyGrau GOLD, Jackson, New Jersey
12 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
We all have these things, that no one can see. They hold us down like anchors, they drown us out at sea.

Really, really, good. Coincidently, some lines are kind of repetetive.  Otherwise, really well written! :)

on May. 14 2011 at 4:30 pm
FatesMistake13, Springerville, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"Most people die of a sort of creeping common sense, and discover when it is too late that the only things one never regrets are one's mistakes." Oscar Wilde

"The books that the world calls immoral are books that show the world its own shame."

ahhh sorry that reply was supposed to be a new comment

on May. 14 2011 at 4:29 pm
FatesMistake13, Springerville, Arizona
0 articles 0 photos 157 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Most people die of a sort of creeping common sense, and discover when it is too late that the only things one never regrets are one's mistakes." Oscar Wilde

"The books that the world calls immoral are books that show the world its own shame."

i really like it

iheartu SILVER said...
on May. 13 2011 at 8:49 pm
iheartu SILVER, Nuevo, California
6 articles 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
best friends always leave footprints in your heart forever.
laugh ur heart out
dance in the rain
cherish the moment
ignore the pain
live, laugh, love
forgive&forget
lifes too short to be
living with regrets

I LOVE IT!!!!!!! great comparisons




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