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Love is like a Death Trap

Love is like a death trap.
It surrounds you, swallowing you up like an ocean.
Making you blind to all but that person.
It tears you limb from limb.
It throws all you've ever worked for away!
It shoves you down a deep, dark, cold hole.
While whispering sweet nothings in your ear.
Love makes you insane, nervous, scared, happy, sad, angry, anxious.
Love is an emotional death trap!
It squeezes you like an Anaconda starting to devour its prey.
Closing up the world to you.
Love is like a death trap,
Need I say more?





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FarFromIdealGirl said...
May 17, 2011 at 3:51 pm
perfect. i can relate so well to this it isnt even funny, keep it up!
 
IluvmybffThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 17, 2011 at 3:54 pm
You should read my lother version odf this. It should be on here too
 
mickey said...
May 16, 2011 at 3:55 pm

that was very good, reminded me of a similar experiance. very good though!

 

 
ema2423 said...
May 15, 2011 at 9:41 am
Really, really, good. Coincidently, some lines are kind of repetetive.  Otherwise, really well written! :)
 
SmileyFace13 said...
May 14, 2011 at 4:30 pm
ahhh sorry that reply was supposed to be a new comment
 
iheartu said...
May 13, 2011 at 8:49 pm
I LOVE IT!!!!!!! great comparisons
 
SmileyFace13 replied...
May 14, 2011 at 4:29 pm
i really like it
 
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