The Islands

I'm from the Islands
I take heaps of pride
Kiss the sand
Where my ancestors died
I pray to them
And ask them why
How am I lucky
To endure such the life
The palms are my blanket
My pillow, the sky
The ocean my home
As to where I will die





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reimers17 said...
May 5, 2011 at 9:27 pm
WOw!!Good Job Kykung:D Seriously love this!!! I might have to use this one too;) LOL just kidding. I'm sooo proud of you cuz! Love you so much!!
 
Feuervogel said...
Apr. 29, 2011 at 10:51 am

love it! really interesting.

has a certain feel to it that i like, and the lines are all a perfect length so it isnt awkward or run on.

good job :)

 
allybymyself said...
Apr. 26, 2011 at 6:53 pm
I really like it!!! The rhythms and words are simple but sound beautiful together. GOOD JOB!
 
ladyleigh said...
Apr. 26, 2011 at 9:59 am
this is sooo good :D! i love the ending :D
 
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