ONE COLD NIGHT

By , Thirchy, India
One cold December's night


I remember one person, who

is a light of my life and

a perfect flower to my eye.



Whenever i become the goat among wolves,

she turns her as a Shepard to save me,

tends me, makes me to graze in grassy field.



She shines on me like the moon when i become

the fading star in the far east horizon and smiles

at me like an angel of night.



Through her eyes i understand the world,

she holds me Stronger than the strong ebb

of the Jordan river.



Her voice is so good, better than the song

of nightingale and sweeter than the

voice of cuckoo.



Now in her linen white stripes she smiles at me

enjoys the beauty of that silent night when

the stars shine in dark part of the world



though the blue night lies over my head

with sparkling stars shining on my face,

but she was the one i want.



She is like the pearls among the mighty ocean,

more value than the Lebanon woods,like a lily,

among the thorns.


when I look up to the sky I see her in that golden night,

soaring through the sky like the little butterfly and she

smiles at me...........



Tears rain down from my eyes, she told me, i'll

love and trust you,till the stars in the skies,

join with the tears in your eyes.





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pete56 said...
May 14, 2011 at 11:28 am
Good job dude........it's awesome
 
RideTheWave said...
May 2, 2011 at 3:18 pm
this is awesome! i am so sorry. it is sad that the best way to write about something is to feel that way. writing gets it all out. good job.
 
chris56 said...
May 1, 2011 at 9:28 am
really nothing is so sad as losing best friend.......u really proved that adam......nice work 5 stars to you
 
asphunt45 said...
May 1, 2011 at 9:19 am
great work dude...it reminds me friend who died before 4 years cause of cancer........really i like him very much,only people who experienced this kinda pain only realized the meaning of poem clearly
 
adam.c replied...
May 1, 2011 at 10:39 am
sorry for ur friend asp........ya really losing friends is the wrost thing i ever experienced.....but my kind comforatable advice is see the sky and realize that the time for us to meet our dear ones is not far (i don't know whether u had religious belif or not)
 
rockyroll199025 said...
May 1, 2011 at 3:13 am
oh ya,it's nice to read poem link this in early morning 3;00 clock......nice job dude......
 
liney girl said...
May 1, 2011 at 3:02 am
Great poem,also from this i can imagine u love your girl friend truely....i want a boy friend like this(:
 
adam.c replied...
May 1, 2011 at 7:35 am
ha..ha..if u want a boy friend like me then let me tell u 1 thing,u r having just because i'm your friend...
 
iluvtaylorswift said...
May 1, 2011 at 2:35 am
nice work dude,really touching one is this,u potrayed clearly what u felt at that time.....god bless u
 
shanny906 said...
May 1, 2011 at 2:20 am
i like the last 6 lines........it's really touching one......i think u r trying to tell readers this message'i can able to see her,feel her and even hear her voice but can't able to touch her or to speak her isn't?  
 
adam.c replied...
May 1, 2011 at 7:34 am
umm....ya....right shan 
 
mike4567 said...
May 1, 2011 at 12:20 am
i like ur kinda of writing brother....nice work...kepp going on...
 
Issac S. said...
May 1, 2011 at 12:11 am
really,great work dude,sorry for your friend....surely she will be happy to see your true love for her in heaven
 
Mama B said...
Apr. 29, 2011 at 9:33 am
this is really good Adam!  Keep up the  good work!!  xo <3
 
poplover said...
Apr. 27, 2011 at 7:30 am
great,really i like this......keep writing on dude and always do better....
 
adam.c said...
Apr. 26, 2011 at 1:27 pm
This is my first attempt in teen ink,so i want to know how i'm writing or want some suggestions to improve me skill....so please leave a comment or rate my work....even though you hate this most don't hesitate to tell it...
 
chris56 replied...
May 1, 2011 at 9:32 am
it's weird that u r telling u wrote this poem though u did not allowed teenink to publish ur name.....any reasons? 
 
adam.c replied...
May 1, 2011 at 10:37 am
ha..ha...well,this is my first experience in teen ink and mistakely i clciked that coloumn(i want to publish my name anonymous)......but really i want my name be in my article
 
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