March 12, 2011
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Charmed by your ways Am I,
Heart soaring, gliding, flying high.
To see the world from another’s eyes.
Hanging on to forbid goodbyes.

You’re colder to me then a lake of ice.
As if I was a swarm of mice.
I’ve said it before and I’ll say it twice,
My love is greater than a field of Rice.

Your barricade is my dreaded foe
The kind of enemy I’ve yet to know.
Piercing my heart with your wicked bow,
I bleed my love into the snow.

Then you saw what I thought was loss
A feeling overpowering and a dominate boss
Your anger and spite you were quick to toss.
As we stood and held each other among the moss.

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Dominicano_Loco said...
Apr. 14, 2011 at 11:09 am
i thought it was corny but thanks! XD
Medina D. replied...
Apr. 19, 2011 at 5:52 pm
well the "field of rice" was kinda corny, I'm not gonna lie.........but other then was BEE-YOU-TEE-FULL! :D
Medina D. said...
Apr. 12, 2011 at 5:33 pm
Shakespeare would be proud
Medina D. said...
Apr. 12, 2011 at 5:31 pm
:*) this smiley says it all. This is outstanding. The type of thing I felt like reading. YOU ARE A WONDERFUL POET. And dont you make me spell it out for you cause this is wonderful. A true work of art. Beach is right, its touching. i wish i could write like this..........i see this ending up in a poetry book dude!! I'm struck with awe!! :*)
Beachgirl1 said...
Apr. 10, 2011 at 9:55 pm
this is just beautiful, and so touching! i love the way you desbribed... everything! it really made me think! the only thing is i would have made it a smidge shorter, but that is just me, i really love it!!
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