When i see you

March 11, 2011
By brittany7 SILVER, Otsego, Michigan
brittany7 SILVER, Otsego, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"a face without freckles is like the sky without the stars. why waste a second not loving who you are?"

When I see you,
My heart beat skips
I stumble to catch my knees,
As I start to trip

Your eyes and the way they sparkle,
It’s hypnotic
The blues how they clash and crash,
It’s chaotic

How your beauty can stop someone,
So they can stare
To watch the magnificence,
Without a care

All this happens,
When I see you
Someday I hope,
You will notice me too.

The author's comments:
i wrote this poem for a class and just fell in love with! i am super passionate about my writing and i believe this got the best of me.

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