Lonely

June 11, 2008
By sissykat PLATINUM, Royal Oak, Michigan
sissykat PLATINUM, Royal Oak, Michigan
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the lonely nights of despair,
the nights I've been waiting,
.....waiting for my resurrection.
As I lie here motionless,
full full despair,
trying to remember my life,
trying to understand where did i go wrong.
as I think,
I hear footsteps coming closer and closer,....
- they are coming for me...
time has come,
the moment is near,
and it's time to face my greatest fear.
he is here,....
i can't run,
can't move,can't scream....
where did I go wrong....
why is this happening to me,
I wish it was over.........


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This article has 4 comments.


bffead_1821 said...
on Dec. 14 2009 at 11:06 am
Omg kat thats so good. and some of these people who leave comments are so dumb.

on Oct. 9 2009 at 8:58 am
What do you wish was over? Who is coming for you? What time has come? Why are you lonely? What is happening to you in the poem?

on Jan. 25 2009 at 7:22 pm
You read my heart and rewrote it in your own words. You are alone and I am alone but if we are both alone, then we can be alone together.

Miss you with all of my Heart and Soul,

Love,

Your friend forever,

Hope!

lexi said...
on Jan. 20 2009 at 9:22 pm
cat, this is amazing! the only thing thats off is the line "full full despair." and i know that you meant full of despair. and its going to be ok. greatest fear?


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