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February 16, 2011
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My heart beats with a longing,
Of what I do not know.
A time long passed.
A day now gone.
A voice not heard.
A gentle touch
Of your shoulder against mine,
As we sat side by side
Talking through the night.

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mattisonteeter said...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 6:16 pm

It really improved my day.

Thanks :)

Healing_Angel This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 4, 2011 at 5:18 pm
I thought of a soft feather and a gentle voice when I first read this. It's beautiful. Moments of inspiration.... I haven't written for a while.... *sighs*
JubilexThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 4, 2011 at 6:10 pm
Thank you. That's the feel I was going for, and it's what I was feeling; that kind of gentle sadness. I'm glad you like it.
The_phoenix replied...
Jul. 11, 2011 at 2:50 pm
Wow, this is really beautiful. It's short structure gives it masses of effect. Nice work =)
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