Early Teen Years

January 30, 2011
By hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
hxcRocker DIAMOND, Haiku, Hawaii
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In the few years passed
Its gone by so fast
Let's go back to the past
And provide some contrast

I found a girl that was beautiful and smart
In the end she tore me apart
I wish I knew from the start
That this girl would break my heart

When I look back on those years
All those nights of silent tears
When I had to stand up and face my fears
They gave me strength which perseveres


The author's comments:
Wrote it for a school assignment. So it's not my best. But figured i'd post it anyways.

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on Feb. 20 2011 at 6:32 pm
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse PLATINUM, Kula, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything you dream is real and everything real is a dream"

I find that poems that are written for school are the worst ones.  Even like the ones I write... A lot of them really aren't that good at all.  It could be better if you changed the rhyme scheme.  Personally I've never liked the aaaa bbbb cccc dddd etc. scheme




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