Immortal Suffering

Stress the real test
Paying the fee
Pressure the prison
Surrounding me

Happiness the lost emotion
Of what I used to be
Music the truest friend
I have ever seen





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amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse said...
Feb. 20, 2011 at 6:33 pm
Try working on your spacing/flow of the poems.  This one is good, but it could use some extra words here and there... or commas.
 
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