January 22, 2011
By candi221 BRONZE, Hamden, Connecticut
candi221 BRONZE, Hamden, Connecticut
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I wish I could force you to understand how I feel.
I hope you realize what you lost was real.
I trusted you with my heart and you caused me pain.
Sometimes I wish I didn't know your name.
I cry knowing your name is branded in my heart.
I'm angry because I let you tear my life apart.
You destroyed everything and left with my pride.
I even let you take the tears that I've cried.
You are like a cut that doesn't want to heal.
Every time it tries you cause the scab to peal.
I'm still left with a scar but you have no mark.
But you were supposed to protect me from the dark.
The day you realize that you lost something true?
Is the day i will forget all about losing you.
And on that day i will hold my head up high.
And you will be the one that is forced to cry.

The author's comments:
We all know what it feels like when we are in love. But what happens when that one person you trust and would do anything for hurts you? Cheats on you? That is what I am going through right now. I tried to capture my feelings as best as I could but, this is my first piece. So please comment, I value the criticism.

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