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When You Loved Me It Gave Me Hope

January 21, 2011
By be.yourself-everyone.else.is.taken GOLD, Chelsea, Michigan
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be.yourself-everyone.else.is.taken GOLD, Chelsea, Michigan
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We were given: Two hands to hold. To legs to walk. Two eyes to see. Two ears to listen. But why only one heart? Because the other was given to someone else. For us to find.

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When you smiled it lit up my world,
One little smirk and my head swirled.
Your voice was my sweet lullaby,
It could make me laugh, and make me cry.
When you breathed it was my cooling wind,
Breezes so strong you had my heart pinned.
Your heavy tears were my pouring rain,
With every drop, it caused me pain.
When you loved me it gave me hope,
Now that it's gone, I don't know how to cope.

© Asia B., Hudson, MA

The author's comments:
I wrote this when my boyfriend and I broke up, if that wasn't obvious enough.
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FindTheBeautyIn_Everything DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 5 2011 at 10:03 am
FindTheBeautyIn_Everything DIAMOND, Grass Lake, Michigan
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"Aerodynamically, the bumblebee shouldnt be able to fly, but, the bumblebee doesn't know that, so it keeps flying anyway."

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