Life Unexpected

January 18, 2011
By Anonymous

I look in the mirror
And what do I see?
A worried teenager
Looking back at me.
Life unexpected
For what lies ahead.
All because she couldn’t
Say no in bed.
Day by day she
Grows more and more.
Rumors from everywhere
About her being a whore.
Changes in her life
With every step she takes.
Like the transformation
From puddles to lakes.
But not everything
Is murky and bad
Try and understand me
Don’t be mad.
All my imperfections
Don’t matter any more.
I have a new existence
That makes up my core.
My unconditional love
Will always be with it
It’s the puzzle piece that
Completes me, it’s a perfect fit.
I feel the doubt
Emitting from your being
But I have faith
So don’t be mean.
I’ll try my hardest
And do my best
Just be there for me
I’ll deal with the rest.
When I look in the mirror
It’s not me that I see
I look in the mirror and
Now see you not me.


The author's comments:
I wrote this during a huge transition in my life. Writing this I felt that I had grown up.

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limelove said...
on Jan. 30 2011 at 4:48 pm
limelove, Gresham, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
Memories last forever.

I agree with lilmartz.

on Jan. 30 2011 at 1:40 pm
Annabelle294 SILVER, Branford, Connecticut
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This is amazing, i felt like i could really connect with what you were saying.

on Jan. 30 2011 at 10:47 am
AMCLRIDCA PLATINUM, CDA, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths you take... but by the moments that take your breath away.

wow...just wow... that seems like the word im looking for. this poem is REALLY good.

AVERAGE BRONZE said...
on Jan. 29 2011 at 11:14 pm
AVERAGE BRONZE, Rosehill, Virginia
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VERY WELL WRITTEN.  CREATIVITY LIES WITH IN

on Jan. 29 2011 at 2:15 pm
lilmartz PLATINUM, Perrysburg, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Live Life Like A Party That Never Ends

I love this! You told it like it is that's for sure. Keep up the good work :)

on Jan. 27 2011 at 7:48 pm
fadingaway1324 SILVER, Latrobe, Pennsylvania
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simple and easily understood i liked it

on Jan. 27 2011 at 6:58 pm
BlueInk94 PLATINUM, Valley Park, Missouri
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this poem is simple but very touching, i was so moved.

on Jan. 27 2011 at 4:06 pm
shakes11 SILVER, Belton, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"Decide that you want it more than you are afraid of it.\" - Bill Cosby

\"Cowards die many times before their deaths,
The valiant never taste of death but once.\" -Shakespeare

This is really good. It's raw and real and personal. I like it. Keep up the good work :)

on Jan. 27 2011 at 11:41 am
Tiffanie_marie GOLD, Sedro-Woolley, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Don't tell me the sky is the limit, when there are footprints on the moon.

Fantastic poem!!

Keep writing(:

and check out some of my work please!



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