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Condensed Hate Soup

I love to hate you.
I hate your eyes

their shape
their size.

The way you walk

or, rather,

swagger.
I hate your name

first and last
I hate you so dearly

I forgot your middle.
My life hates your life,

(past lives too)
God hates himself for creating you.
I hate your voice

your laugh – had enough
I hate your thoughts

(or lack thereof)
I hate your drinking
I hate your drugs
I hate your half-hearted

one-armed hugs.
I hate everything you’ve been
I hate everything you’ll ever be
I love to hate you
I hate that you’re too much like me.





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sethmeyerslover1234 said...
Jan. 23, 2011 at 7:16 pm
when i first read this i had thought that u were insulting someone bu then i read farther. this is a beautiful poem byyynx keep up the good work and don't ever stop i <3 ur work 
 
byyynx said...
Jan. 23, 2011 at 6:08 pm
Thanks for the feedback everyone! (:
 
kenna2013 said...
Jan. 23, 2011 at 4:55 pm

This is a great piece, probably one of my favorites :) I love how the flow and word choice really adds to the over all mood.

Check out some of my pieces if you have the time (:

 
Kesslee S. said...
Jan. 23, 2011 at 12:00 pm
i really agree with this piece. it flows, you use great words. it is a great piece.
 
queenofstrange said...
Jan. 23, 2011 at 9:07 am
I really love the title. This is overall funny and bitter, I really like that combination.
 
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