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The Moods & Weather!

January 7, 2011
By I.Hope.You.Dance. SILVER, Somewhere In, Florida
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I.Hope.You.Dance. SILVER, Somewhere In, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"I would define, in brief the poetry of words as the rhythmical creation of beauty!" -Edgar Allan Poe

"...All little girls should be told they're pretty, even if they aren't.” -Marilyn Monroe!

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I am the weather.
Every hurricane and tornado is me.
My anger is destructive.
When you see the rain,
that is me.
My pain is shown.
The shining rainbow is me,
I am strong and hopeful again.
Dark clouds are me.
I have been disappointed.
The bright sun is me,
on my amazing days.

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SpringRayyn PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 18 2011 at 10:28 pm
SpringRayyn PLATINUM, Lakeville, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't punish yourself," she heard her say again, but there would be punishment and pain, and there would be happiness too. That was writing."
--Markus Zusak, "The Book Thief"

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This one doesn't make that much sense. I am confuzzled. And it seems a bit out of order as well, having the hurricane, then rain, than rainbow, then clouds, then sunshine. I think you could use better descriptive words than "amazing" and "dissapointed" just to easier get your point across.