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Butterfly, Fly Away!

You've been my butterfly
since your birth.
I love you so much,
you're of great worth.

I've never seen such perfection
the love shown in your eyes
We love the personality you show
Oh how I hate it when I say my good-byes.

Many memories already created.
You are such a cutie.
All of your smiles
add true beauty.

Everybody seems to love you; How could they not?
Mostly the smiles you give.
What do I want you to see?
The good life I will live!



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SpringRayynThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 18, 2011 at 10:21 pm:
I love this one! The rhythm is a little off in some lines like the word "personality" throws off that one line and so that stanza is different from the rest. I don't know if that was intended or what.
 
I.Hope.You.Dance. replied...
Jan. 19, 2011 at 5:12 am :
The rhyme scheme is ABCB throughout the entire thing.
 
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